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Emma describes how her Bridport Prize-winning story came about.
‘Maura’s Arm’ started life as ‘The Moor’s
Leg’. In researching my novel The
Mathematics of Love I’d
come across the legend of St Damian and St Cosmas, who miraculously
replaced a man’s damaged leg with that of an already-buried
Moor, and I’d found out something about modern prosthetics.
Human bodies and machines: that was what I wanted to write about.
Its centre would be a modern woman with the kind of artificial
arm that’s just beginning to be made, that links into the
body’s
own bio-electronic systems. I peered at her and realised that
she was on the London Eye, that vast machine built for little
humans’ pleasure.
I knew that was the end of the story, so at what point in her
story was I going to start mine? With a tiny machine that lives
inside
the human body: an IUD. And between the two was the Transport
Museum, which enshrines one way that bodies and machines co-exist.
Or crash:
that’s the emotional centre of the story. What writer could
resist the Dead Man’s Handle?
After that, it was a matter
of building the route between these three points, and webbing
all the ideas and images between them.
I write
about history – it’s
the way I think – but this story had to be present-day because
of Maura’s
arm, so after a short struggle with her as a train driver, she became
a curator of machines – clocks and watches (I’d just read Longitude) – and
from that came a subsidiary set of ideas about time and our machine-measuring
of it, and sea-going colonialism as part of London’s history. Her
name echoes the Moor: I changed the title, because my MPhil tutor, the
novelist
Christopher Meredith, said the story isn’t really about the experience
of phantom limbs that the legend embodies, and he was right. And Maura’s
Irish name also makes another small point about post-colonial London.
Luke
is named after the patron saint of doctors. The babies wired up in
intensive care I knew about, from ten days’ watching my own
newborn daughter, and I put Luke at Thomas’s on the South Bank
to be near the Eye before I remembered the bronze Florence Nightingale.
Googling ‘prosthetic
arms’ trawled
me far more more sci-fi than medicine, so I wanted a cyborg in my story.
I added Princess Diana casually and it was Chris who pointed out that
she was
killed by a machine. Then there are alarm systems, guns, espresso machines,
Playstations, helicopters, radio masts. And playing off them is the
other set of images: sex, embryos, babies, ant-heaps, insects, flowers,
seed-pods,
wombs,
and love.
Maura is lightly touched in, I know, and Luke even more so.
They are the framework for what I really wanted to write about, and
readers
who expect
the story to
be about their relationship may not get it. But I did have a very
strong and immediate sense of Maura’s thought and feeling,
and though I don’t
often use present tense for a whole story, and I only sometimes use
first person, here that combination was just right.
I don’t
remember much changing in workshops and tutorials, beyond tightening
the prose and clarifying the ideas: I think it’s a story
that either you get or you don’t. Luckily for me, Jim Crace,
judging the Bridport Prize, did get it.
A version of Building ‘Maura’s
Arm’ first appeared
in Seventh
Quark magazine.
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